I Too Can Reach The Bursting Point

Posted on November 27th, 2006 in Anne Frank by steve92

In English class, we are currently reading a book called The Diary of a Young Girl by Anne Frank and we were supposed to re-read the page 43 and pay particular attention to the last page 46 and write about my thoughts and feelings on what she says.

I dont really understand about this situation that Annes parents treat her differently from her big sister, Margot. Annes parents treat Margot better than Anne because I think Margot is just older than Anne. I dont find this situation very well because my parents treat me and my brother equally for most of the things like when my brother and I quarrel and have a small fight, she grounds me and my brother in the same way. On the other hand, some other friends said that they are treated unfairly and differently from their siblings like Anne and I could read from The Diary of a Young Girl that it will feel very dreadful, awful, and terrible. However, some people who get treated differently from their siblings are saying that they are used to this situation and they dont really care.

She says in page 44:

Im so used to that that Im utterly indifferent to both Mummys jawing and Margots moods

According to that, I can understand how Anne and her sister were treated unfairly that she was used to that. When Anne and Margot have an immense or little fight, her mom just takes Margots side, stick up for Margot and starting to scold and ground Anne. I think it is very unfair that parents treat siblings differently because all mankind who is existed in this world should be treated equally and same as the others because they all have the same rights and they are all from the humans as they are. In my opinion, this kind of little discrimination and gigantic discrimination like using violence are the same because they are differentiating and treating people differently but including violence for the huge discrimination, thats the only difference between them.

She says in page 44

because I adore Daddy. He is the one I look up to. I dont love anyone in the world but him.

According to that, I can see thoroughly that Anne loves her dad the most in the world. Even though her dad treats them differently, she admires him the most in the entire universe. In my opinion, usually, kids dont really admire or respect their parents that much but Anne does, so I think her dad means valuable, consequential and meaningful to her. She thinks that her dad doesnt notice that he treats Margot differently from her and she thinks that she also has some right to be taken seriously too.

Memories or Dresses?

Posted on November 20th, 2006 in Anne Frank by steve92

In 8th grade English class, a few days ago, we started reading a book called “The Diary of a Young Girl” by Anne Frank. In her diary Anne Frank mentioned the items that she would pack before they would hide. According to that, if my parents told me to pack one small bag with things which mean a lot to me and I don’t have any idea where I will be going or how long I will be there, I will bring 5 things which mean a lot to me.

The first thing that I will bring is my camera because before I leave I can take pictures of my excellent friends, things that mean a lot to me, such as my guitar and my diary, some constructions which are gorgeous, attractive, beautiful and fabulous and some pictures of food that I love! So when I go to a mysterious place, I can look at them and imagine about them.

Second thing that I will bring is a miniature atlas but with full of information and explanations that shows where countries are located and information about countries because with this atlas, I won’t get bored and I can read them everyday. I can learn and seek new information about many countries and this atlas mainly describes almost every single country in the world, so I will never finish reading it, but I will be finishing this atlas someday and I will read more precisely, accurately, effectively and carefully, then I will be mastering the entire world!

Third thing I will bring is my album which was used for collecting pictures of young Steve. So if I have to stay at the mysterious place much longer than I expected, and when I grow up, I will look at them and think about events that happened during young Steve’s days.

Fourth thing that I will bring is some pens and a lot of paper, so I can record my days and write important, significant, and essential incidents that will happen during the days, so I can glance and look through them and reflect them someday. I can also draw pictures and cartoons and have fun by drawing them.

The last object that I will bring is my perfume and deodorant because I think how people think about you is very important. In my opinion, if you smell dreadfully and horribly, you will give them a bad first impression. On the other hand, if you smell good, people will consider you as a high-quality and fine person and you will give them an excellent first impression. So I think those five objects which are my atlas, camera, album of young Steve, pens with paper, and deodorant/perfume are the most meaningful objects that I will bring to the mysterious place.

perfume perfume
pens and pencils in pencilcase pens and paper

album-of-young-steve.jpg album of young Steve

atlas Atlas

Courage

Posted on November 14th, 2006 in Anne Frank by steve92

Tome, courage means the ability to work out and resolve in dangerous or risky situations. It can also be the ability to give speeches or to present presentations in front of many varieties of people. In another way, it can be like the ability to fight with other enemies or your opponents courageously, fearlessly, and bravely. I think people who can touch geckos and all other creepy insects are courageous, so in my opinion, courage can be a small ability. Courageous people are spirited, vivacious, brave, noble, heroic and valiant. My impressions for courageous people are able to resolve and unravel most of the hazardous and dangerous situations and conflicts without any suffering and ordeals. I think all the people who were in wars are courageous because they were fighting for their own countries as hard as they could and I think they were courageous enough to fight against enemies. In my opinion, if someone is courageous, he/she can accomplish and achieve anything they want because they deserve to accomplish their goals by being courageous.

Journal - The Project, Diary Entires

Posted on November 14th, 2006 in Reflective Journal by steve92

During the first quarter, in Eighth Grade English class, we read a book called Lord of the Flies by William Golding. We were supposed to create a project about this book with the given twenty lists of choices. I selected to create diary or journal entries for a week in the voice of one of the characters because I wanted to experience one of the characters thoughts more accurately and precisely. I chose Piggy because I comprehended Piggys characteristic the most in this story. I think he is the most special, intelligent, significant and important character in this book.

While I was making this project, I was a critical thinker because I built meaning and understanding using prior knowledge and new information. I gathered analyzed and processed information from a variety of sources, and I applied problem-solving skills to facilitate learning I used my knowledge from what I understood about the book and new information from the internet. For me to create this journal entry, I asked my friends for help and advices for this project because I didnt get some ideas and stories, so it demonstrates that I built meaning and understanding using prior knowledge and new information. I used internet websites and pictures, so I could obtain some information that I didnt know. I also used book and asked friends about the book about how I should write a diary like the formats, introductions and conclusions. This shows that I gathered, analyzed, and processed information from a variety of sources. However, I was not a critical thinker in another way because I didnt select, monitor, and adjust problem solving strategies. If I have participated in discussions more carefully and if I have researched more accurate information, I would have improved making my project. I think I was a fine critical thinker and the critical thinker is the greatest ESLR for this project.

I was also an involved citizen while I was finishing this project because I demonstrated responsibility in active decision-making. I asked my friends and thought what they said and what I thought through, so it shows that I demonstrated responsibility in active decision-making. In English class, I sometimes got involved in some discussion questions and while executing this project, I made myself some decisions for the diary entries like how Piggy would consider about some situations and how Piggy would feel. I When I was completing this project, I think I was not being an effective communicator because I didnt listen respectfully and ask questions to facilitate understanding and achieve insight. I didnt ask my English teacher if I had questions about the project or the book and I didnt listen to other peoples decisions and a few opinions which were beneficial for my project, so it shows that I did not listen respectfully and ask questions to facilitate understanding and achieve insight. I just did this project by myself, but I seldom asked my friends for this project. I can be an effective communicator by listening respectfully and asking questions to my teacher and my friends. However, most of the time, I completed this by myself and did the diary entries with my opinions and thinking, so it shows that I didnt collaborate with others in appropriate learning situations to achieve my goals. I was not being a self-directed learner too because I didnt monitor, adjust and document work in progress like writing the date, writing numbers of pages, and using the clear font for my diary entries. However, I identified needs and applied appropriate learning strategies like taking notes.

While I was doing this project, I was on msn or on other messengers most of the time and I was chatting with my friends for a long time and sometimes for a while, so it kind of disturbed me. On the other hand, when I turned it off, I could concentrate and could do my best. I was very busy when I was doing this project because I decided to do another project when only 2 days were left, so I spent those two days doing my project as perfect as I could. I was also an academic achiever because I used Microsoft and other tools like internet and my phone to complete this project, so it shows that I demonstrated technological literacy and the use of technology as a tool for the efficient and creative completion of a project. I could have used some books, and references to acquire better information and knowledge.

Next time, if I have to complete any projects and assignments or if I do any kinds of projects, I will try to collaborate with others in appropriate learning situations to achieve group goals and listen respectfully and will ask questions to facilitate understanding and achieve insight, in other words, I will be an effective communicator. I will also put a lot of effort on the projects and will be a much better and accurate critical thinker for the projects. Im also planning to participate or involve more and actively in all of my classes, so I can get better and more information than I would have in my brain. I will also prepare some discussion questions, so I would know what I want much excellently and I can make sure that I know the question or a conflict that I wanted to know.

To evaluate myself, I think I was a critical thinker and an academic achiever most of the time because I wrote every single sentence for diary or journal entries by thinking carefully and I reflected and tries different things myself to make better diary entries. Overall, I think I did a great job because I put a lot of efforts on it by writing a lot of words and sentences. If I can evaluate or give myself a grade even though I already got a grade from Mr. R, I would give myself an A- because I wrote a lot and I spent most of my days working on this diary entries, but I still satisfied with my grade that Mr. R gave me because I think I deserved that grade.

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My 1st Post

Posted on November 8th, 2006 in General by steve92

Hey guys! I’m Steve. As you can see from my title, this is my first time to post essays or journals on my blog. I’m very excited about my first blog. If you would like to read my friends’ blogs, Please Click HERE. Now here is a cool picture of Teletubbies!